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Hey /crit/
it's currently 11:02pm central time, and I'll be working on this for another three hours or so before I hit the hay. Do you think I could get a redline on the legs and groin? I'm not working with lines here, so, it'll be really easy to make any changes.I'm thinking that I need to draw the tummy facing away more. Less turned toward the viewer, I suppose. I don't know, any help would be appreciated.
It's like 15% done at this point, now's the time to start making changes before I add any details from the waist down.
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Hello All, I figured i'd give this page a go after I saw some pretty in depth critiques on the board. I finished this piece about a week ago. I'd appreciate any kind of technical crit you want to give, paintovers, redlines, or just your opinions would be greatly appreciated. I've been focusing on trying to get a less digital look as of late, so I am open to any and all suggestions about where to go from here.
thanks :3
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1 posts and 1 images omitted. Click Reply to view.So how am I doing without the crit section?
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Does this board still work?
Come on /crit/, help me improve.
I don't use ipersaturated colour anymore. And im putting more time on my work.
That is one of the last I've done, without photoreference .Express yourself freely.
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I posted this on another board but remembered this one and saw Deatzh roaming around, so i'm putting it up here with an "Help me, PERSON WITH THE D NAME!"
Original Text:
Since i figure there's pretty much no chance that anyone willing to give critique would even see this on FA i thought it'd ask you guys.The intent behind this picture was to establish head shape and colour scheme for a species/tribe/whatever of dragons i had in mind for a while.
I tried to go for a cute look without doing a too flat/too human face. Part of the intent behind the feathers and horns was to visually enlarge the head to get the appearance of cuter proportions without actually venturing into hydrocephalic territory.
It's still a bit rough around the edges but i have to admit that overall i'm pretty happy with itBefore i dive into stuff like playing around with skin texture, rendering the feathers properly and perhaps switching over to lineless i'd love to hear some opinions and critique regarding what i got so far, i'd hate to have to redo the most labour intensive parts because i missed some obvious flaws.
(for example i'm still not quite sure if the nostrils are properly aligned)Comment too long. Click here to view the full text.
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I'd like for people to critique my art, as I have started doing anthro art a month or two ago, and yiff art very recently. I hope my art doesn't strike you as sickening or vile, as the material I draw is mostly hermaphroditic, as people have different sexual orientations, aswell as the quality of the art. You can refer to me as Driggs, as there is no real user system on this website I am aware of. Other than that, I'd just like comments on my art. Thanks.
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and Rice, guys, I'm sorry.
There's such a huge backlog here and I'm trying to get to it but like
there's a lot.I AM WORKING ON IT, I WILL GET TO YOU EVENTUALLY, I APOLOGIZE FOR LATENESS.
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Here's another little doodle I threw together. This is a profile of one of my characters, Scarlet, who I decided to really work on. She's supposed to be this tall, regal-looking warrior queen, and I think I did fairly well in pulling that off. Her armor is supposed to be stone and green metal, with gold and gem fittings here and there. I'm planning on putting this figure in a bigger landscape with two other characters of mine, and I'm doing each character individually, then I'll splice them into a landscape I'll phase in later.
Now I know for a fact that my coloring needs work. I've never digitally colored anything, and I just picked up Adobe Illustrator last week, so you could say this piece is a test. I think I went way overboard on her shading, and the light source isn't as clear as I would have liked it to be. As of yet, I know my textures are severely lacking, so I'll be working on that next.
Her anatomy is bothering me. The foreshortening of her leg and pear didn't come off as drastic as I was hoping for, and she just sort of looks stretched to me. Her breastplate is also a bit off to me, and I'm having trouble fixing the design. I'm a little concerned about her design in general, and I'm working overtime to really nail it down.
Thats as much as I can see for now. Any help you can give would be helpful.
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So I'm drawing a little elk TF bit, but there are some bits that are just erking my that I'm not entirely sure what to do with. Bits in particular being the twist in the lower back, the left hand (which was more of a placeholder anyway), and getting the proper perspective I wanted.
Any suggestions I could get to make this look better?
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