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Another character. Nude, but not genitalia. I don't roll that way.

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>>886
No.

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>>888

I'm inclined to agree, and I drew it.

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Also I've been noticing I'm only drawing one angle for the faces. I'll fix that bullshit.

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>>889
And that makes you a cool dude.

There are some things that will help you over here: http://icrit.org/resources.html

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(Durp...)

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embarrassed at lower one

And yeah.. I suck at humans too. And kissing. FFFFF.

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And not wanting to spam... anything else you want to tear apart...

FA: Ryshili
DA: Ryshili

Been in such a huge art rut because I know my stuff never comes out right... that I actually want opinions... tired of friends just blowing me off when I'm asking for honesty.

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I'd like to request a series of anatomical studies
but if you only want to draw one request per person i'd go with a torso study

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Oh great.

Another animuuu refugee.

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Will it be alright if you can take a request from me?

If you decide to, please click on my name "Maruki" to email me.

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>>831
Don't be an ass.

>>829
I would love to give ideas, or even try to learn off each other.

NurikoUtsukushii@gmail.com

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Ungh, yeah, stroke that knotty stomach dick.

So murrypurryhawt.

>>147
Also this.

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>>146

          Good start for not having any art experience. The one thing you should try doing first is trying this in pencil and moving to a solid contour line. Right now it looks like a lot of smaller straight lines to build up your curved lines like in your shoulders.

          Something else you can look at is your proportions. Your arm that is in front of you is sitting on the line of foreshortening or disproportional try to get it lined out. One thing you can do is get a digital camera and sketch out your own arm in that pose until you have it down then draw it onto another figure. If we compare both the arms they wouldn't match up so also watch the arm that trails behind you, and try to bring them to a happy medium.

          Blotch used to have an excellent tutorial on the importance of gesture sketching. Whats great about it is that your art doesn't have to be 100% refined to practice it since your simply going for mass and proportion. Again good try and keep it up

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>>186

>Blotch used to have an excellent tutorial on the importance of gesture sketching.

No.
That tutorial itself has absolutely nothing on gestures, and is quite possibly one of the worst 'highly acclaimed' tutorials I have ever seen.

I wish I could sage this.

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>>186

The amount of retardation in this post should be considered illegal by law.

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I'm sorry, but it really does look like you don't have much experience with art...

I suggest drawing as much as you can until you get better. Here's sympathy...I can't draw as good as that myself!

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>>866 /crit/ is for your own work, not others.

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> I was told it shouldn't be a big deal posting non furry work here

It isn't.

>>488
Lots of detail in there. That's the good i can say about it.

The bad: Utterly terrible lighting. For me this breaks the whole image. I cannot get any sense of real perspective from this. Especially bad are the spikes at the ceiling which are lighted from left and right, while the ones no the floor are only lighted from the right.

Then there's also a problem with the water: The "detail lines" are just random white lines for one, with no real intent behind them. For the other, the ones in the distance are of the same thickness and fidelity as the ones in front, again destroying any possible sense of perspective.

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>>490

these links my help you out a bit

http://characterdesigns.com/

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=30

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Aren't you supposed to be in the other thread, busy waxing poetic about poorly replicated weaboo penguin with not-so-well-thought-out penis attachment?

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>>497
wat

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>>497

Did you say something?

Shoo. :)

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>>840

Yoink some premade models, move a bunch of sliders, and there you go, poser porn so easy even a severely-inbred retarded republican can do it.

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>>843
I dislike someone impersonating me and make me look like a stupid deluded. when you create a penelope and fruit, my intension was never to boast of something that I have,

>>842
poser is certainly easy to use graphics program, but I am still very new to their use and in my opinion tend to make many mistakes withthe light, the use of textures, I have also not good for a proper subject inmaginacion.

that's why I posted my work here, to know the unbiased opinion of others in order to improve every day a little more

Attn: Randou
Post my apology if I make any mistakes in grammar, I speak Spanish and I have to use google translator to post my messages

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>>839

Immature little piss ass kid starting shit?
You don't say.

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Unfortunately I have to agree with rude yet true comments that were made by people above. First question is "Did you create these models yourself?" if yes then we can go into more "what is good and what is wrong" thing... If not then I guess here the discussion ends. Sorry but using premade rigged models in any 3D program is just too easy. Ok it could be animated... animating requires skills too, but it's static. I suggest you should learn modelling first (assuming these are not your models).

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I regret that there are people with so little courtesy, but I can not change the world, if it is true that models are prefabricated to the poser, the program allows me to mold clay as one mode, but not altering its structure.

if art is to create something from nothing, then I have to agree with you and say that my work is useless.

But I think that art is not only that, but also give a sense art aesthetic, and exotic to the figure, the way try this is using poser doll, and in the same way a puppeteer does conveys an emotion .

Written by criticism here is obviously not get it, but not stop trying to not only ask you that before you criticize, think a bit what they are saying,

if the problem is critical because the doll named penelope is hermaphroditic, can rest assured that it will put more here, (instead placed the girl mouse who is female), my intension was not to offend his tastes

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>>715
the right hand should be a little more flat
and the lips should have a lower angle

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>>715
Oh lordy, this is almost fappable. almost.
This is what I see. Despite previous commentators, I can't see anything wrong with the hand. I do however agree about the chin. The way that I see it, the head is almost at a 90 degree angle away from the viewer, so I would treat it as such. For the chin, I would round it out to coincide with 'her' curvy appeal.
-Light and Shadow_
Based on most of the lighting that I see in the torso, the light source looks like a flat one or cathode-ray tube(argon). So given that angle and flat look....The blue to the right is a correction of the shade over the right arm to the hip. Figure that any shapes that occur past the shoulder line are shaded, this includes the left foot. The arse, however, does not need shading, again based on the {back, neck, head} lighting. So then I bastardized it and whited the arse and areas that I think need lightening instead. White...heh.heh-heh.
So, I hope that helps. Just what I saw.

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>>853
You're pretty horrible at this. You should stop while you're only behind a little.

Don't turn this place into more of a steaming pile of shit than it already is.

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>>858
Comments after >>715 are not showing up in the 'reply'-ing pages.
Don't tell me why you disagree, I'm not OP. Tell in full why you would disagree with what I said. But I will feed you this once, troll, it's good to get constructive, useful information when you ask for it.
For the OP, I use Open Canvas 1.1, which is useful for quick doodling because of it's ease and it's basic.

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"constructive, useful information"
LOL

yeah have fun with your trash