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So yeah, I've been working on a project for a while now and I'm proud of how far its come and the general reception its gotten over the years. One thing I'm looking for though is some way to make my art more appealing for those on the fence about my game. Understand, I'm busy with work during the week, and even when I'm not I only work on art a little bit every day, so don't expect me to make any serious progress quickly.
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Oh, hello.
I'm wondering if the faggots here can help. I don't usually visit this image board very often, anyway, so I guess I'll just put some of my WIP artwork out here that I haven't posted yet on my account.
So this is probably one of the most complex poses I have ever drawn so far. So in this image the female dog is supposed to be humping the male dog in a "reverse-missionary" or cowboy style sex position. The male is supposed to be pulling her arms to stabilize her positioning, while also biting her tail and pulling back on it too. So it the way it's drawn can get confusing.
Now keep in mind that this implicates an unrealistic situation for which the male dog cannot move around very much. So the female dog would probably have to use her legs to move up and down, but she has her legs up for a moment in this image.
So the male dog uses her arms as leverage so he can safely lay down, bring his feet up to her breasts and then rest his feet there.
I mostly want to know if everything looks like it's in order before I go on with this. Are the snouts too long? Are the shoulders, necks and heads a bit off? What else can you suggest or critique? Thanks.
I am looking for critique for my work. Take a gander at my FA page.
This is my work I am not afraid of critique or even being poked fun of. It actually fuels me to be better, and hopefully I can called a "decent artist" some day.
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1 posts and 1 images omitted. Click Reply to view.Hi all, never tried a fur before, or tried female curves. So it was mostly that I focused on.(background is terrible, I know). So critisize the hell out of the character, I would like to know as many flaws as you can find :)
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A friend told me of this site has a critique section so I've decided to stop by here.
Here's a pic of my new blue wolf fursona. His name is Tabloc. I made this pic with a picture reference. Tell me your thoughts and if you have any critique or constructive criticism, don't hesitate to tell me. I'm all ears. I'm willing to improve my artwork anyway.
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I've been getting mixed reactions to this and want some specific feedback on what i have to work on
things I see myself:
lightsources aren't completely coherent
there is a difference in style beteen the lower and upper body (this actually results out of it being originally only a bust - i added the legs much later)
the pose might look weird because the object his foot is placed on is not visible
shading is too smooth for fur. I'll add fur texturing when i find a tutorial for SAI that works for me.All of those aren't complete dealbreakers in my eyes, so what am I missing?
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11 posts omitted. Click Reply to view.This is my first attempt of any kind of sketch using Photoshop,
So can people just recommend how I can fix it, what needs to be changed/added and any more appropriate brushes that are available etc. Thanks heaps, hopefully if I get the hang of it i might be able to contribute some proper and descent works D:
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I can't sleep so I decided to try making a furry drawing. I've never really drawn furry stuff before but it was fun.
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Here's a wip of a new wolf character I'm trying to draw. I want to know how my anatomy is, and muscle work is. Any critique and constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated.
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I have problems drawing hands, and I was wondering if anyone could assist with that. This is my most current piece.
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