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Why do you finish these up within such a short time of posting them here? It seems kind of useless.

The face on the chick is kind of bugging me, particularly the bump on the far side of her face. It looks like an absurdly bulging brow, which has very little place on a female character.

Them shoulders are pretty huge too.

Something I'm worried about is how the junk is the only portion you put much effort into. The breasts and the genitals are all polished up fairly well, but then everything else is just thrown on as an afterthought. I get the idea that you may find it arousing or you really don't care enough to work on anything else, but it looks really, really shoddy. Furries ain't gonna care, but artists will.
Try not to fall into the trap of only finishing what you want to finish as fap fodder and then losing interest in the rest of the image. In any case that you do it, it's kind of pointless to post for critique.

Brush up on the anatomy of the buttocks down to the toes. The torsos are acceptable, but the butt and thigh on the girl look really strange.

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oh holy shit it's a lady

I glanced over it quickly and it looked like a dude getting plowed

ladies should not be mannish unless you are deliberately going for that

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My opinion, but worst stile to begin with.
Try something more realistic

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>>672
I gotta' agree there. Naylor's stuff is very very stylized. Learn how everything is supposed to work first before you go tinkering with different ways to make it look pretty.

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>>670

adjustments I'm plowed through

lol

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The nec seems too long.

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Digitigrade doesn't mean that he stand simply on his tip toes.
Watch some dog legs structure to understand this.
Also keep the draw simple at first.

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>>430 truly a beautiful picture, her posture really stands out and her body masculinty its truly amazing, I hope to see more artwork from you soon

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>>430 Thanks for the advice. I'll see what I can do to flesh her out a bit more. I'm still a little new to digitally painting things, so I played around a bit more then I should have with her shading. I'm going to head back to her outline and throw down a couple layers of shades and see how that picks things up.

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Here; a redline. A lot of the issues here were addressed by the first person who replied. Some of my anatomy might be wonk but I've tried to basically figure out your girl's posture and make the pose more compact/practical.

Also, this is a nitpick but it is my MAJOR nitpick about archery and how people draw archery; her arrows are on the wrong side of the bow. There is a lot of weirdness going on with your bow design that can be chalked up to fantasy, but the arrows are an easy fix.

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Adobe Illustrator (preferably CS3 or CS4) is a great program for drawing her digitally. That's how I do most of my work, and it's a pretty simple program to use.

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>>647
sure the proportions are far more realistic, but it lacks the dynamics of the original drawing. in fact, both should be combined.

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>>325

why is there no edit post option? I would have loved that before i deleted the post. oh well when the picture is finished i will post it so i can stay

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>>327
so it can stay i mean... again no edit post...

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Ehh.
I'm sorry Jakk, this shouldn't be in your thread. If you're still bumming around I'd suggest just reposting your picture in your old thread, we'll see what we can do about this one.

Also loltest.

And you, BDB, GOOD JOB. You made me stop caring.

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>>336

and that's why you've got us hardassed anons to filter out the crap for you firsthand.

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You crazyass anons are highly appreciated.
Just throwing that one out there.

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Here's the second one, Lumineya. I need to finish the armour on the face pic.

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Gideon. This one is just concept art of his body (he is supposed to have clothing, lol).

He's a character in an FPS I'm working on with some friends. The third eye on his head enhances his sniping abilities. He's an Oisin (Uh-sheen), an alien race with gods based off of Celtic Pagan gods. Oisin are lynx+fawn hybrids.

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Gideon's face.

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Last one, and the oldest of the bunch (drawn almost a year ago), Zylos.

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The first two are extremely well done, you have an eye for turning basic lines into a smooth, flowing form. I don't know if compilation pieces are something you are fond of, but I think the images are juxtaposed very intelligently and the space is effectively utilized. You mentioned the feet on the first one don't look quite right, I would recommend looking at some reference pictures to get an idea for how calves and heels are structured. I think most of the issues with the foot on the left could be resolved by eliminating that dip where the top of the foot meets the leg, and expanding the left boundary of the boot's sole to make it look more like it is facing the viewer. As for the one on the right, you have to remember that there is a foot in front of that heel, try using some of that excellent form to bring out the sides of the boot and foot. (Feet are a common point of contention for me, too. It takes some practice).

As for your Gideon concepts, I really like the head shot, but remember most necks (especially on burlier subjects) are thick enough to terminate at or near the ear lobes (actually looking at it again I can see you were drawing a free-floating head, but I left this comment in for general advice). On the full body shot, Gideon is pretty well constructed with the exception of the shoulders and arm musculature. I would suggest smoothing the upper boundaries of the shoulders to meet the collarbone in a more natural fashion. The bicep could also use a redo, try making the upper part of it meet the shoulder more naturally, and as you work your way down the arm make it a little thinner as you go.

Zylos (as with your other full-bodies) is very well constructed. The face is so-so, a little flat but I can see you have greatly improved over the past year.

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Thin the waist above the hips, and fatten out the chest, a longer tail would be good 2, with softer facial features.

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>>651

Are you critiquing the drawing or the design? They're asking for a critique for the design, proportions don't really matter if it's just conceptual. And... it's a female Why flatten the chest? :p

Anyway, Icebear, I like it. I think something on the right shoulderblade would look good with that heart design you have going on.

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>>658

>why flatten

>>651

>fatten

If it don't look right read it again yo.

Might get around to this thing eventually. Busy week, busy weekend.

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>>642
smaller version

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I see:
Hands too small
left arm too short
Etc.
Many problem with basic anatomy as far i can see.
You should read some of the above link with loomis book about figure drawing, pratice a lot and then come back here to have more advices.

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:| k

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im going to study for one week and come back to see if i improve...

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Anybody want to help?

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Yes, as long as you're actually baracudaboy.

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Don't blow my coner D:
I'm like the shittiest artist on the planet and this drawing almost seems like a joke.
WHYYY would I want people to know who I was.

lol, oh, the file name. last time I post on lulz stoned -_-

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Lol, lulz is over there.

It is okay, though.

I will see what I can do.

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>>633
hahahaha, even more evidence I should stay off the computer at times of...brain deficiency. XD jesus.