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"Artists, read before posting!

Before you post your art to ask for critique, please read these tutorials. They explain the basic principles of drawing and figure drawing. Most posts where these basics are missing will never get a response, as people are quite frankly sick and bored of explaining over and over that you would have to pretty much learn how to draw first, before you could improve."

This section of text applies to you, so get your ass back up there and look through the links.

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Thank you.

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She needs just a little wider hip area or taller buttcheeks. She will still be slinky-esque, it's just that her hips are too thin currently and she has manbutt.

Women's cheeks are often either exaggerated length or widthwise, whereas men's are usually more round or even all about. Google Frank Frazetta and take a couple minutes to see how he draws backs and butts on his women. He had variation so don't just base it off one picture.

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Why not shove a vaccuum up there while you're at it

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Your answers are at the top of this board ^_^ Just a texture hint though, you shouldn't just paste it over the top of the surface, take into account the volume of the object you're putting it on.

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>>722

didn't thought that was so notorius for someone to notice. Thanks

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>>718
Focus on the anatomy more before trying out textures.

There's much room for improvement, study muscle structure

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You like dog dicks up your ass, amirite?

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well... I mean you can't really mess up flat colors. There's really nothing much to say about it.

Try shading?

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>>1481
You can if you have a terrible color palette

>>1476
You need to use less saturated colors. Some neutral toned background and not so much contrast between the colors on the character. It's pretty painful to look at right now.

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The character is Vanessa Z. Schneider from P.N. 03 from the Gamecube that plays more like a SHUMP than a third person shooter.

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>>1304 No need to be disagreeable, just pointing out that levels will fix the problem will probably be just as effective.

Anyway, four major things that jump out at me:

-Muscles. It looks like you've put some effort into studying them, but I can spot a few minor errors. Remember paying attention to muscle structure is extra important when you draw characters that are naked.
-You obviously at least know the basics (things like basic anatomy, construction, etc.) so I'm not sure why your linework is so shaky? You've already committed to drawing furry porn, you might as well be more confident about your lines.
-If you follow the midline down the torso, you will see that the genitals are off-center. Additionally, it seems like one leg is wider than the other.
-Never crop a drawing at a character's joint! It looks awkward and draws the eye right off the page. If you absolutely must crop a character, try to avoid doing it directly at a joint, especially a major one like the knee.

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ok thanks very much for the tips, ill work on em some more.
was just my first furry drawing so was a little nervous about it.
thanks again :) ill try to improve where i can

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The ribcage extends beyond the pectorals, so make sure you don't start six-packing too high up the torso ;) Pay attention to the pose as well. If it doesn't feel comfortable to you, then it shouldn't be comfortable to the subject. Locking his hands behind his head would have been a more stable way to support his arms. Speaking of arms, don't over-fold them at acute angles, especially if the subject is muscled. Find a full length mirror and take pictures of yourself in these poses to help with natural poses.

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>>1301 other then the eye looking straight up at the sky ,the picture looks great,the more you draw the better you will get fred

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>>1304

With 99% of "criticism" being shit like this, it's no wonder that the number of producers of furry-related stuff decreases daily.

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You're doing great, just pay attention to perspective and center of gravity.