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Your answers are at the top of this board ^_^ Just a texture hint though, you shouldn't just paste it over the top of the surface, take into account the volume of the object you're putting it on.

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>>722

didn't thought that was so notorius for someone to notice. Thanks

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>>718
Focus on the anatomy more before trying out textures.

There's much room for improvement, study muscle structure

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You like dog dicks up your ass, amirite?

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well... I mean you can't really mess up flat colors. There's really nothing much to say about it.

Try shading?

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>>1481
You can if you have a terrible color palette

>>1476
You need to use less saturated colors. Some neutral toned background and not so much contrast between the colors on the character. It's pretty painful to look at right now.

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The character is Vanessa Z. Schneider from P.N. 03 from the Gamecube that plays more like a SHUMP than a third person shooter.

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>>1304 No need to be disagreeable, just pointing out that levels will fix the problem will probably be just as effective.

Anyway, four major things that jump out at me:

-Muscles. It looks like you've put some effort into studying them, but I can spot a few minor errors. Remember paying attention to muscle structure is extra important when you draw characters that are naked.
-You obviously at least know the basics (things like basic anatomy, construction, etc.) so I'm not sure why your linework is so shaky? You've already committed to drawing furry porn, you might as well be more confident about your lines.
-If you follow the midline down the torso, you will see that the genitals are off-center. Additionally, it seems like one leg is wider than the other.
-Never crop a drawing at a character's joint! It looks awkward and draws the eye right off the page. If you absolutely must crop a character, try to avoid doing it directly at a joint, especially a major one like the knee.

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ok thanks very much for the tips, ill work on em some more.
was just my first furry drawing so was a little nervous about it.
thanks again :) ill try to improve where i can

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The ribcage extends beyond the pectorals, so make sure you don't start six-packing too high up the torso ;) Pay attention to the pose as well. If it doesn't feel comfortable to you, then it shouldn't be comfortable to the subject. Locking his hands behind his head would have been a more stable way to support his arms. Speaking of arms, don't over-fold them at acute angles, especially if the subject is muscled. Find a full length mirror and take pictures of yourself in these poses to help with natural poses.

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>>1301 other then the eye looking straight up at the sky ,the picture looks great,the more you draw the better you will get fred

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>>1304

With 99% of "criticism" being shit like this, it's no wonder that the number of producers of furry-related stuff decreases daily.

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You're doing great, just pay attention to perspective and center of gravity.

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Your art is awesome!

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While I do like your art it does look a bit flat.

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yeah I know it's a bit flat...trying to work on that

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A tiny bit of shading is all you really honestly need, like with this first one. I'll put up a bit of a modified picture to give you an idea.

Besides that, it looks good.

If you don't exactly know the whole shading thing, there's some pretty cool tutorials floating around in the internet. There's also the way you can teach yourself, set something near a light source and just practice the shading. There's a bunch of different types of shading, but I prefer the one that I used in this picture.

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My newest piece. it has been awhile since I updated here ^^

www.furaffinity.net/sinkiovitrell

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Nice drawing, color would make it pretty good.

If you're into it, I would suggest more fluids on the penis, such as semen or feminine fluids (I lol'd at myself for typing that)

I'd also say give the guy some more definition, he looks like some fat husky mutt. His belly button is also creeping me out.

As for the face, I would say have her arch her back and neck more, close her mouth and grit her teeth, and close her eyes. Add a bit of blush on her cheekbones.
Maybe some saliva? That would be purely on your preference.

All in all, great work so far, you could definitely become a favorite artist of mine with this quality of work!

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The picture is overall very well done, so good job!

Some good points:

• Tufts of fur are in all the right places
• Hair flows smoothly
• Good shading on hair and upper body
• Great facial expression
• Nice wrinkling affect on panties

Some not-so-good points:

• Hind paws (feet):
  the toes seem short, and the paws are at much too steep of an angle.
  the ankle joint also seems to be missing.
  

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