Art critique and advice; beginner artists are welcome to post here; includes an oekaki. (NO FLAMES)
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This is a commission piece I'm doing for a friend of mine, and my deadline is two days from now. The problem is I've never really had much experience with the male form, and would like a little advice as to how it's turning out. Muscle placement and such.
I've gotten some good help here before, and since I would like this commission to be worth the money I'm getting for it, any help you guys have got to give would help. I'm aware that my line quality at the moment is utter shit (I only started doodling this about ten minuets ago), so I know I need to work on that. The work won't be going in color anytime soon, so all I need to know is whats working and whats not before I go much further.