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Art critique and advice; beginner artists are welcome to post here; includes an oekaki. (NO FLAMES)

Artists, read before posting!

Before you post your art to ask for critique, please read these tutorials. They explain the basic principles of drawing and figure drawing. Most posts where these basics are missing will never get a response, as people are quite frankly sick and bored of explaining over and over that you would have to pretty much learn how to draw first, before you could improve.

Courtesy of Arne Niklas Jansson: Basic and comprehensive drawing and painting tutorial
Courtesy of Bakaneko: Figure Drawing Basics, Further Anatomy, Hands

These were brought to my attention by Aeresque#Artist. Courtesy of Scribd: Drawing the Human head, Drawing Dynamic Hands, Dynamic Figure Drawing
And for those of you who want it a bit easier, we also have the whole thing as one neat rar with all three books in pdf form.

NEW! These were brought to my attention by MajorTom in #fchan. Courtesy of Andrew Loomis: Creative Illustration, Drawing the Head and Hands, Eye Of The Painter, Figure drawing for all it's worth, Fun with a Pencil, Successful Drawing, Drawing Dynamic Hands.

If you think you know a good basic tutorial that would fit in here, feel free to contact me under Xenofur in IRC and I will add the link.





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[-] [+] No.1306
Difficult pose/angle 
File: killingme.png -(49704 B, 608x364)
49704 No.1306 1306

This pose is killing me! I'm finding it really hard to see what's wonky about it so I need an outside source to tell me.
It's supposed to be an enormous wolf with his backside lifted up to get a rimjob
ignore the placeholder paws because I don't need help with those..

No.1307 - Link Reply Report 1307

Everything needs a little fix.
neck, shoulderblade, hip, arms, face...
Some lines are overdone while others are missing.

Improve the basics.

No.1309 - Link Reply Report 1309

The leg is far too short. It should be just under twice as long. The fact that it is actually shorter than his arms is probably contributing to the pose looking off. There are a few other minor errors, but nothing terribly out of place in a sketch. Fix that leg, actually draw the other leg too (it would have to be really awkwardly posed to be hidden in this sketch), focus on cleaning up the anatomy a bit more, and it should be fine.

No.1311 - Link Reply Report 1311

Is it gay porn?
It'd better not be gay porn.

No.1316 - Link Reply Report 1316

Firstly, don't use Redrusker's style. He does mock-dogs and mock-dogs only.