Art critique and advice; beginner artists are welcome to post here; includes an oekaki. (NO FLAMES)
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I've been drawing furry art since 2003, but, I haven't drawn much in the way of erotica or porn until recently.
I copied the pose from a picture I really like. I'm coloring it, slowly, because I work full-time. I'm looking for critique on the face though. She's got the bog standard O-face, it's boring me, and I was hoping for a suggestion or two. Any help?
If you're into it, I would suggest more fluids on the penis, such as semen or feminine fluids (I lol'd at myself for typing that)
I'd also say give the guy some more definition, he looks like some fat husky mutt. His belly button is also creeping me out.
As for the face, I would say have her arch her back and neck more, close her mouth and grit her teeth, and close her eyes. Add a bit of blush on her cheekbones. Maybe some saliva? That would be purely on your preference.
All in all, great work so far, you could definitely become a favorite artist of mine with this quality of work!