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Art critique and advice; beginner artists are welcome to post here; includes an oekaki. (NO FLAMES)

Artists, read before posting!

Before you post your art to ask for critique, please read these tutorials. They explain the basic principles of drawing and figure drawing. Most posts where these basics are missing will never get a response, as people are quite frankly sick and bored of explaining over and over that you would have to pretty much learn how to draw first, before you could improve.

Courtesy of Arne Niklas Jansson: Basic and comprehensive drawing and painting tutorial
Courtesy of Bakaneko: Figure Drawing Basics, Further Anatomy, Hands

These were brought to my attention by Aeresque#Artist. Courtesy of Scribd: Drawing the Human head, Drawing Dynamic Hands, Dynamic Figure Drawing
And for those of you who want it a bit easier, we also have the whole thing as one neat rar with all three books in pdf form.

NEW! These were brought to my attention by MajorTom in #fchan. Courtesy of Andrew Loomis: Creative Illustration, Drawing the Head and Hands, Eye Of The Painter, Figure drawing for all it's worth, Fun with a Pencil, Successful Drawing, Drawing Dynamic Hands.

If you think you know a good basic tutorial that would fit in here, feel free to contact me under Xenofur in IRC and I will add the link.





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Critique my drawing? 
File: crit_1322683097520.robertge_strip.jpg -(74636 B, 970x1280)
74636 No.1434 1434
Source: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6302014/

If anyone has any critique on this drawing, anything that could be done to make it better. Please let me know :3

No.1442 - Link Reply Report 1442

The picture is overall very well done, so good job!

Some good points:

  • Tufts of fur are in all the right places
  • Hair flows smoothly
  • Good shading on hair and upper body
  • Great facial expression
  • Nice wrinkling affect on panties

Some not-so-good points:

  • Hind paws (feet):
    the toes seem short, and the paws are at much too steep of an angle.
    the ankle joint also seems to be missing.
    the paws seem to be at the wrong angle, from this angle you should be able to see the sole/paw pad

  • Legs:
    seem too beefy/bulky for a character of her build (she has slender arms and a trim 

        waist/butt)

    look very plain, not enough "action". Having one leg raised up or bent more might fix this
    alternatively, you could add new highlights (white sections) such as on the ankles or on 

        the soles/paw pads.

Overall, great picture. Much better than some of the art I've seen on here.

A few extra pointers:

  • Add a background! Maybe a bedroom with an open dresser, or some clothing strewn on a
    messy bed...
  • Where is her nipple? If you're going for /c/, then I'd suggest adding a bra of some sorts, one matching in color to her panties.