Art critique and advice; beginner artists are welcome to post here; includes an oekaki. (NO FLAMES)
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The picture is overall very well done, so good job!
Some good points:
Tufts of fur are in all the right places
Hair flows smoothly
Good shading on hair and upper body
Great facial expression
Nice wrinkling affect on panties
Some not-so-good points:
Hind paws (feet): the toes seem short, and the paws are at much too steep of an angle. the ankle joint also seems to be missing. the paws seem to be at the wrong angle, from this angle you should be able to see the sole/paw pad
Legs: seem too beefy/bulky for a character of her build (she has slender arms and a trim
look very plain, not enough "action". Having one leg raised up or bent more might fix this alternatively, you could add new highlights (white sections) such as on the ankles or on
the soles/paw pads.
Overall, great picture. Much better than some of the art I've seen on here.
A few extra pointers:
Add a background! Maybe a bedroom with an open dresser, or some clothing strewn on a messy bed...
Where is her nipple? If you're going for /c/, then I'd suggest adding a bra of some sorts, one matching in color to her panties.