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well, when I started it, I had the idea that there was going to be a ton of characters in that scene, twilight and DJ-pon in the foreground, big mac in the background protecting applebloom who's on the ground hurt. Rarity being turned to stone by a cockatrice. with the entirety of ponyville in chaos. The idea was that whatever was in everfree forest invades ponyville. There was also going to be an Ursa Major wrapped around the town hall while swatting at rainbow dash. Basically a very intricuit scene with a lot of elements. I started thinking that maybe that's a bit too busy for one picture. But as I stated above, I got sidetracked by another project and never came back to this.
DJ Pon3 does not have red eyes. Has same colour as Rainbow Dash. I think DJ Pon3 would actually wear cyber-goggles rather than those. Seems a style of sunglasses Rarity would wear. Twilights neck looks off.