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I'm wondering if the faggots here can help. I don't usually visit this image board very often, anyway, so I guess I'll just put some of my WIP artwork out here that I haven't posted yet on my account.
So this is probably one of the most complex poses I have ever drawn so far. So in this image the female dog is supposed to be humping the male dog in a "reverse-missionary" or cowboy style sex position. The male is supposed to be pulling her arms to stabilize her positioning, while also biting her tail and pulling back on it too. So it the way it's drawn can get confusing.
Now keep in mind that this implicates an unrealistic situation for which the male dog cannot move around very much. So the female dog would probably have to use her legs to move up and down, but she has her legs up for a moment in this image.
So the male dog uses her arms as leverage so he can safely lay down, bring his feet up to her breasts and then rest his feet there.
I mostly want to know if everything looks like it's in order before I go on with this. Are the snouts too long? Are the shoulders, necks and heads a bit off? What else can you suggest or critique? Thanks.