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The hands should be larger,especially the males. His arm also seems short. You can't really tell her neck from her chest. His pants also look furry. Look at and reference from human anatomy guides,and study people which includes yourself and then apply it to anthro characters.
so cute! i like it so far, well, the rest has been said, i'll add something about the shoulders... agh i dunno how to explain it without image tutorials, but you need to draw it like more looking down... arms looks stiff too! but it can be easily resolved by using curvy lines action lines, don't be afraid on using them, it always helps!! of course study anything about constructing anatomy first to know how to apply action lines later remember folds are important too, always take references! don't be afraid
about the shading... contrast, use alot of colors to make it more fun, but also make a balance between lights n' stuff, something long to study too, but slowly you'll be getting it!