Guys, calm down.
In first time, if I request critiques, all people are free of say everything that he/she have in the mind.
Ones can be bad others good, but all the points of view I must read. You can do disscuss about the critiques but always with the respect to the opinion/critiques of others persons.
And now the more important: Litzy.
>>1703:
I test differents colors in the design, the red its impossible of change because I see like the ideal color of the character and for the name. And later dark blue its for give her a form of view that she no is very female. Anyway, Ill test more colors.
And the bag its only an accessory of travel, in the nexts pics (you can see the Clean section of Fchan) you can see that she dont have the bag.
And the tails, you dont believe it, it can be give her more agility like the ailerons of a F1.
>>1705
Thank you so much for the fanart. This is great!! =)
>>>The colors are a tad jarring, a good idea is to mute them a tad.<<<
Like in you pic, more lighter? Ill test it.
>>1707
She is the main character. She is searching the killer of the parents for revenge. But she havent experience in the fights, will have hard rivals to progress in the fight and in the personality.
Thank you so much for the critiques. Like I say before, in the Clean section of Fchan you have more pics of her.