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Art critique and advice; beginner artists are welcome to post here; includes an oekaki. (NO FLAMES)

Artists, read before posting!

Before you post your art to ask for critique, please read these tutorials. They explain the basic principles of drawing and figure drawing. Most posts where these basics are missing will never get a response, as people are quite frankly sick and bored of explaining over and over that you would have to pretty much learn how to draw first, before you could improve.

Courtesy of Arne Niklas Jansson: Basic and comprehensive drawing and painting tutorial
Courtesy of Bakaneko: Figure Drawing Basics, Further Anatomy, Hands

These were brought to my attention by Aeresque#Artist. Courtesy of Scribd: Drawing the Human head, Drawing Dynamic Hands, Dynamic Figure Drawing
And for those of you who want it a bit easier, we also have the whole thing as one neat rar with all three books in pdf form.

NEW! These were brought to my attention by MajorTom in #fchan. Courtesy of Andrew Loomis: Creative Illustration, Drawing the Head and Hands, Eye Of The Painter, Figure drawing for all it's worth, Fun with a Pencil, Successful Drawing, Drawing Dynamic Hands.

If you think you know a good basic tutorial that would fit in here, feel free to contact me under Xenofur in IRC and I will add the link.





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[-] [+] No.730
Something Silly 
File: 02.jpg -(520288 B, 1913x1149)
520288 No.730 730

Any construction errors (I'm sure there's got to be)? I'm trying to draw a big ass here, but I feel like her back looks fucked up now, and I feel her leg doesn't attach to her ass properly.

No.760 - Link Reply Report 760

>>730
um...... wheres her arms/bottom jaw/legs?
I get shes a chubby and everything but at least make the fat bunch -around- her body parts, not flood over them :|

No.766 - Link Reply Report 766

>>760

From the angle I drew her, I wasn't sure if her lower legs would be visible. her arms are folded over her breasts, but apparently I didn't do that right, either. No explanation for the jaw, I've always been unsure as to how to go about giving her the right jaw. As far as fat bunching around the parts, do you mean like folding? Believe me, I tried finding a reference but I came up with zip. Thanks by the way.

File: 02__Construction.jpg -(648268 B, 1913x1149)
648268 No.767 - Link Reply Report 767

Dammit I can't delete the post I just made. But here, I went over the characters guidelines to establish where the space was. I know the problem with the guy, he's lying at the wrong angle. I have to fix that. The girl, I don't know, yeah.