Looking for anatomy critiques, and possibly a redline!

Art critique and advice; beginner artists are welcome to post here; includes an oekaki. (NO FLAMES)

Artists, read before posting!

Before you post your art to ask for critique, please read these tutorials. They explain the basic principles of drawing and figure drawing. Most posts where these basics are missing will never get a response, as people are quite frankly sick and bored of explaining over and over that you would have to pretty much learn how to draw first, before you could improve.

Courtesy of Arne Niklas Jansson: Basic and comprehensive drawing and painting tutorial
Courtesy of Bakaneko: Figure Drawing Basics, Further Anatomy, Hands

These were brought to my attention by Aeresque#Artist. Courtesy of Scribd: Drawing the Human head, Drawing Dynamic Hands, Dynamic Figure Drawing
And for those of you who want it a bit easier, we also have the whole thing as one neat rar with all three books in pdf form.

NEW! These were brought to my attention by MajorTom in #fchan. Courtesy of Andrew Loomis: Creative Illustration, Drawing the Head and Hands, Eye Of The Painter, Figure drawing for all it's worth, Fun with a Pencil, Successful Drawing, Drawing Dynamic Hands.

If you think you know a good basic tutorial that would fit in here, feel free to contact me under Xenofur in IRC and I will add the link.

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Ataraxia 10/05/27(Thu)21:59 No.754 754

How does he look? :O
And I feel like there's something wrong with his right (our left) arm, I just can't figure out what it is...

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Ataraxia 10/05/27(Thu)22:01 No.755 -

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>>754
And if you're feeling extra nice, would you mind telling me how my watercolors are?
I realize the anatomy/perspective is pretty wonky, but I'll just say THAT'S MY STYLE HURRHURR.

Ataraxia 10/05/27(Thu)22:35 No.756 -

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>>754
LAST THING.
Cat in the picture is the same as http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3232298/
I was trying to keep that same slender build but make it look a little more correct. :S

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Ataraxia 10/05/28(Fri)18:37 No.764 -

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Dammit guys,
reply faster. :I

Ataraxia 10/05/29(Sat)22:30 No.765 -

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>>754
Well, so much for that.
Sorry, I work too quickly. :I
Finished thing here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3929469

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