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Art critique and advice; beginner artists are welcome to post here; includes an oekaki. (NO FLAMES)

Artists, read before posting!

Before you post your art to ask for critique, please read these tutorials. They explain the basic principles of drawing and figure drawing. Most posts where these basics are missing will never get a response, as people are quite frankly sick and bored of explaining over and over that you would have to pretty much learn how to draw first, before you could improve.

Courtesy of Arne Niklas Jansson: Basic and comprehensive drawing and painting tutorial
Courtesy of Bakaneko: Figure Drawing Basics, Further Anatomy, Hands

These were brought to my attention by Aeresque#Artist. Courtesy of Scribd: Drawing the Human head, Drawing Dynamic Hands, Dynamic Figure Drawing
And for those of you who want it a bit easier, we also have the whole thing as one neat rar with all three books in pdf form.

NEW! These were brought to my attention by MajorTom in #fchan. Courtesy of Andrew Loomis: Creative Illustration, Drawing the Head and Hands, Eye Of The Painter, Figure drawing for all it's worth, Fun with a Pencil, Successful Drawing, Drawing Dynamic Hands.

If you think you know a good basic tutorial that would fit in here, feel free to contact me under Xenofur in IRC and I will add the link.

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[-] [+] No.817
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350180 No.817 817

Critique needed please, I wanna upload this in DA, but I wanna know if I need to change anything first. Thanks in advance.

No.818 - Link Reply Report 818

She has too much space between her ribcage and pelvic things

shorten the distance between the fold showing the bottom of her back and her butt.

No.819 - Link Reply Report 819

goddamn it, i wish I had noticed that earlier T_T. Thanks for pointing that out though

No.820 - Link Reply Report 820

Unless you were planning on a slinky hybrid, the torso looks a tad too long.

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303412 No.823 - Link Reply Report 823

more like this?

No.824 - Link Reply Report 824


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287406 No.826 - Link Reply Report 826

Is this better? Or should I round out the upper left-hand side of the tummy more? I don't think she looks like a "Slinky" any more >_<

No.828 - Link Reply Report 828

Looks all right, Shnider

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435868 No.834 - Link Reply Report 834

I'm finally finished re-doing it

No.1056 - Link Reply Report 1056

>>817 All I can say is that this is a very fun pose. I like the composition here.