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Art critique and advice; beginner artists are welcome to post here; includes an oekaki. (NO FLAMES)

Artists, read before posting!

Before you post your art to ask for critique, please read these tutorials. They explain the basic principles of drawing and figure drawing. Most posts where these basics are missing will never get a response, as people are quite frankly sick and bored of explaining over and over that you would have to pretty much learn how to draw first, before you could improve.

Courtesy of Arne Niklas Jansson: Basic and comprehensive drawing and painting tutorial
Courtesy of Bakaneko: Figure Drawing Basics, Further Anatomy, Hands

These were brought to my attention by Aeresque#Artist. Courtesy of Scribd: Drawing the Human head, Drawing Dynamic Hands, Dynamic Figure Drawing
And for those of you who want it a bit easier, we also have the whole thing as one neat rar with all three books in pdf form.

NEW! These were brought to my attention by MajorTom in #fchan. Courtesy of Andrew Loomis: Creative Illustration, Drawing the Head and Hands, Eye Of The Painter, Figure drawing for all it's worth, Fun with a Pencil, Successful Drawing, Drawing Dynamic Hands.

If you think you know a good basic tutorial that would fit in here, feel free to contact me under Xenofur in IRC and I will add the link.

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Penelope & Fruit 
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1366433 No.838 838

This is my first work for Fchan, I would like to know your opinon about it, and also if you have any idea to make 3D

No.840 - Link Reply Report 840

I understand that you do not like the poser or 3D images, but ... Do not you think you're exaggerating when they said that everything is horrible poser?

in my opinion is an excellent tool not only to create 3D images, it is also useful for designers to see the relationship gemotrica of bodies and the action of light on them.

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Yoink some premade models, move a bunch of sliders, and there you go, poser porn so easy even a severely-inbred retarded republican can do it.

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461360 No.848 - Link Reply Report 848

I dislike someone impersonating me and make me look like a stupid deluded. when you create a penelope and fruit, my intension was never to boast of something that I have,

poser is certainly easy to use graphics program, but I am still very new to their use and in my opinion tend to make many mistakes withthe light, the use of textures, I have also not good for a proper subject inmaginacion.

that's why I posted my work here, to know the unbiased opinion of others in order to improve every day a little more

Attn: Randou
Post my apology if I make any mistakes in grammar, I speak Spanish and I have to use google translator to post my messages

No.851 - Link Reply Report 851


Immature little piss ass kid starting shit?
You don't say.

No.852 - Link Reply Report 852

Unfortunately I have to agree with rude yet true comments that were made by people above. First question is "Did you create these models yourself?" if yes then we can go into more "what is good and what is wrong" thing... If not then I guess here the discussion ends. Sorry but using premade rigged models in any 3D program is just too easy. Ok it could be animated... animating requires skills too, but it's static. I suggest you should learn modelling first (assuming these are not your models).

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340882 No.864 - Link Reply Report 864

I regret that there are people with so little courtesy, but I can not change the world, if it is true that models are prefabricated to the poser, the program allows me to mold clay as one mode, but not altering its structure.

if art is to create something from nothing, then I have to agree with you and say that my work is useless.

But I think that art is not only that, but also give a sense art aesthetic, and exotic to the figure, the way try this is using poser doll, and in the same way a puppeteer does conveys an emotion .

Written by criticism here is obviously not get it, but not stop trying to not only ask you that before you criticize, think a bit what they are saying,

if the problem is critical because the doll named penelope is hermaphroditic, can rest assured that it will put more here, (instead placed the girl mouse who is female), my intension was not to offend his tastes

Attn: Randou

Post: if I make some typos I apologize, because I do not understand English and I have to use google traducctor of both to understand and to convey my messages.


Post2: Figures may encourage, if you wanted, but that would take me time, however I consider basing their criticism that I have to work even before going to that level, so that my work does not look like an amateur