http://fchan.us/crit Newest posts on /crit http://fchan.us/crit/res/430.html#650 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>Icebear</span>10/03/16(Tue)13:15</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/430.html#i650'>No.650</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/430.html#650'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q430.html#i650'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/430.html#i650'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>Adobe Illustrator (preferably CS3 or CS4) is a great program for drawing her digitally. That&#39;s how I do most of my work&#44; and it&#39;s a pretty simple program to use.</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/649.html <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <span style='text-decoration:none;'>File: <a target='_blank' href='/src/crit_1268762679564_sierra.jpg' rel='nofollow'>sierra.jpg</a> -(<em>31062 B, 551x480</em>)</span> <span style='font-size: small;'></span><br /> <a target='_blank' href='/src/crit_1268762679564_sierra.jpg' rel='nofollow'> <img src='/crit/thumb/crit_1268762679564s_sierra.jpg' width='200' height='174' alt='31062' style='border: none; float: left; margin: 2px 20px' /></a> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'>Fursuit idea...</span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>Icebear</span>10/03/16(Tue)13:04</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/0.html#i649'>No.649</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/0.html#649'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q0.html#i649'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/0.html#i649'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>So&#44; this is my latest idea for my next fursuit. She&#39;s a Coywolf (coyote+wolf) named Sierra. I&#39;d like to make her look a little more feminine&#44; but I&#39;m not sure how...<br />Anyway&#44; what do you think? Does it look ok? Any changes I should make? <br />I&#39;m considering possibly airbrushing some kind of typical wolf-pattern onto her back&#44; but idk yet. I need opinions/suggestions! </p><p>Thanks :3</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/215.html#648 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>AaarbydeeTul108</span>10/03/14(Sun)23:47</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/215.html#i648'>No.648</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/215.html#648'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q215.html#i648'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/215.html#i648'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p><a href="/crit/res/215.html">&gt;&gt;215</a><a href="/crit/res/215.html#504">&gt;&gt;504</a><br />Making the necks smaller? no. please keep as is. Reason being that both of your posted drawings have an elegance to them and one way to retain that feel is in the basic anatomy. Take&#44; for instance&#44; the Kiminoans of Star Wars in George Lucas&#39; &quot;Clone Wars&quot;: Their makeup requires a bit of elegance and care of movement. Instead of everyone downing an elongated neck&#44; why not try to match the rest of the body to the neck?<br /><a href="http://www.furaffinity.net/user/blueblur8lover/" rel="nofollow">http://www.furaffinity.net/user/blueblur8lover/</a><br /><a href="http://www.furaffinity.net/user/peritian/" rel="nofollow">http://www.furaffinity.net/user/peritian/</a></p><p>^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This artist draws and excellent example of what I&#39;m getting at!<br />In any case&#44; keep going! You&#39;re doing good!</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/430.html#647 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <span style='text-decoration:none;'>File: <a target='_blank' href='/src/crit_1268283522564_redline.gif' rel='nofollow'>redline.gif</a> -(<em>86552 B, 848x842</em>)</span> <span style='font-size: small;'></span><br /> <a target='_blank' href='/src/crit_1268283522564_redline.gif' rel='nofollow'> <img src='/crit/thumb/crit_1268283522564s_redline.jpg' width='200' height='198' alt='86552' style='border: none; float: left; margin: 2px 20px' /></a> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>angrboda</span>10/03/10(Wed)22:58</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/430.html#i647'>No.647</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/430.html#647'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q430.html#i647'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/430.html#i647'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>Here; a redline. A lot of the issues here were addressed by the first person who replied. Some of my anatomy might be wonk but I&#39;ve tried to basically figure out your girl&#39;s posture and make the pose more compact/practical. </p><p>Also&#44; this is a nitpick but it is my MAJOR nitpick about archery and how people draw archery; her arrows are on the wrong side of the bow. There is a lot of weirdness going on with your bow design that can be chalked up to fantasy&#44; but the arrows are an easy fix.</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/642.html#646 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>Lajin</span>10/03/08(Mon)10:10</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/642.html#i646'>No.646</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/642.html#646'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q642.html#i646'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/642.html#i646'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>im going to study for one week and come back to see if i improve...</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/642.html#645 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>Lajin</span>10/03/08(Mon)09:42</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/642.html#i645'>No.645</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/642.html#645'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q642.html#i645'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/642.html#i645'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>:| k</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/642.html#644 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>Noob</span><span>#jv7jOwRFJ2</span>10/03/08(Mon)08:32</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/642.html#i644'>No.644</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/642.html#644'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q642.html#i644'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/642.html#i644'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>I see:<br />Hands too small<br />left arm too short<br />Etc.<br />Many problem with basic anatomy as far i can see.<br />You should read some of the above link with loomis book about figure drawing&#44; pratice a lot and then come back here to have more advices.</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/642.html#643 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <span style='text-decoration:none;'>File: <a target='_blank' href='/src/crit_1267953785564_Untitled-1.jpg' rel='nofollow'>Untitled-1.jpg</a> -(<em>253571 B, 711x1362</em>)</span> <span style='font-size: small;'></span><br /> <a target='_blank' href='/src/crit_1267953785564_Untitled-1.jpg' rel='nofollow'> <img src='/crit/thumb/crit_1267953785564s_Untitled-1.jpg' width='104' height='200' alt='253571' style='border: none; float: left; margin: 2px 20px' /></a> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>LaJin</span>10/03/07(Sun)03:23</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/642.html#i643'>No.643</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/642.html#643'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q642.html#i643'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/642.html#i643'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p><a href="/crit/res/642.html">&gt;&gt;642</a><br />smaller version</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/642.html <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <span style='text-decoration:none;'>File: <a target='_blank' href='/src/crit_1267953460564_folf.jpg' rel='nofollow'>folf.jpg</a> -(<em>622555 B, 1408x2656</em>)</span> <span style='font-size: small;'></span><br /> <a target='_blank' href='/src/crit_1267953460564_folf.jpg' rel='nofollow'> <img src='/crit/thumb/crit_1267953460564s_folf.jpg' width='106' height='200' alt='622555' style='border: none; float: left; margin: 2px 20px' /></a> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'>what do ya think?</span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>LaJin</span>10/03/07(Sun)03:17</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/0.html#i642'>No.642</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/0.html#642'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q0.html#i642'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/0.html#i642'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/604.html#641 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>LaJin</span>10/03/06(Sat)02:32</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/604.html#i641'>No.641</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/604.html#641'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q604.html#i641'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/604.html#i641'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>i think i understand digitigrade legs now.. i see.. thanks for the help ^.^</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/604.html#640 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>LaJin</span>10/03/06(Sat)02:21</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/604.html#i640'>No.640</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/604.html#640'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q604.html#i640'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/604.html#i640'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>i didnt use dodge... i used eraser but forgot it was soo big that the brush i was using would feather out...</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/633.html#639 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'></span>10/03/05(Fri)22:00</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/633.html#i639'>No.639</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/633.html#639'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q633.html#i639'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/633.html#i639'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p><a href="/crit/res/633.html">&gt;&gt;633</a><br />hahahaha&#44; even more evidence I should stay off the computer at times of...brain deficiency. XD jesus.</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/604.html#638 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'><a href='http://www.furaffinity.net/user/kashe'>Deatzh</a></span><span><a href='http://www.furaffinity.net/user/kashe'>#<span style="color:#ffc581; border:thin dashed white;"><b>Artist</b></span></a></span>10/03/05(Fri)17:41</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/604.html#i638'>No.638</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/604.html#638'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q604.html#i638'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/604.html#i638'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>Good work. Keep studying&#44; of course.<br />Look up some diagrams on digitigrade legs&#44; too&#44; for more help with the leg muscles.</p><p>Might want to resize things like this in the future though. They&#39;re pretty big. And along the lines of alteration&#44; see about using the spot healing brush to clear out unwanted marks instead of the dodge tool.</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/633.html#637 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'><a href='http://www.furaffinity.net/user/kashe'>Deatzh</a></span><span><a href='http://www.furaffinity.net/user/kashe'>#<span style="color:#ffc581; border:thin dashed white;"><b>Artist</b></span></a></span>10/03/05(Fri)15:21</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/633.html#i637'>No.637</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/633.html#637'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q633.html#i637'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/633.html#i637'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>Lol&#44; lulz is over there.</p><p>It is okay&#44; though.</p><p>I will see what I can do.</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/633.html#636 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'></span>10/03/05(Fri)14:13</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/633.html#i636'>No.636</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/633.html#636'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q633.html#i636'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/633.html#i636'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>Don&#39;t blow my coner D:<br />I&#39;m like the shittiest artist on the planet and this drawing almost seems like a joke.<br />WHYYY would I want people to know who I was.</p><p>lol&#44; oh&#44; the file name. last time I post on lulz stoned -_-</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/633.html#635 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'><a href='http://www.furaffinity.net/user/kashe'>Deatzh</a></span><span><a href='http://www.furaffinity.net/user/kashe'>#<span style="color:#ffc581; border:thin dashed white;"><b>Artist</b></span></a></span>10/03/05(Fri)12:33</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/633.html#i635'>No.635</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/633.html#635'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q633.html#i635'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/633.html#i635'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>Yes&#44; as long as you&#39;re actually baracudaboy.</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/633.html#634 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'></span>10/03/05(Fri)08:11</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/633.html#i634'>No.634</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/633.html#634'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q633.html#i634'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/633.html#i634'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>Anybody want to help?</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/633.html <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <span style='text-decoration:none;'>File: <a target='_blank' href='/src/crit_1267797963564.baracudaboy_feeesh2.jpg' rel='nofollow'>crit_1267797963564.baracudaboy_feeesh2.jpg</a> -(<em>78318 B, 700x700</em>)</span> <span style='font-size: small;'></span><br /> <a target='_blank' href='/src/crit_1267797963564.baracudaboy_feeesh2.jpg' rel='nofollow'> <img src='/crit/thumb/crit_1267797963564s.baracudaboy_feeesh2.jpg' width='200' height='200' alt='78318' style='border: none; float: left; margin: 2px 20px' /></a> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'>fish</span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'></span>10/03/05(Fri)08:06</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/0.html#i633'>No.633</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/0.html#633'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q0.html#i633'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/0.html#i633'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>What am I doing wrong?!<br />And before you say &quot;everything&quot; ugh&#44; could I maybe get a redline please :&lt;<br />I really dont know where to go with this. :&lt;</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/604.html#632 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'></span>10/03/04(Thu)22:21</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/604.html#i632'>No.632</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/604.html#632'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q604.html#i632'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/604.html#i632'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>oh i know... that&#39;s my biggest problem so far... and it was really just... quick... didn&#39;t think too much about it&#44;&#44;&#44; just went... i realized it halfway through and didn&#39;t really want to redo it... so i left it</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table> http://fchan.us/crit/res/584.html#631 <table style='font-family:sans-serif;font-size:11pt;border-collapse:collapse;margin:4px;'><tbody><tr> <td style=' vertical-align:top; clear:both; float:left;'></td> <td> <label><span style=' font-weight:bold; font-size: 1.2em;'></span> <span style='font-weight:bold;'>Noob</span><span>#jv7jOwRFJ2</span>10/03/04(Thu)13:02</label> <span class='reflink'><a href='/crit/res/584.html#i631'>No.631</a></span> - <span style='background-color:rgb(0,0,153);color:rgb(255,255,255);'> &nbsp;<a href='/crit/res/584.html#631'><img src='/fcp/link.gif' alt='Link' title='Link'></a> <a href='/crit/res/q584.html#i631'><img src='/fcp/q_reply.gif' alt='Quick Reply' title='Quick Reply'></a> <a href='/crit/res/584.html#i631'><img src='/fcp/reply2.gif' alt='Reply' title='Reply'></a> </span> <blockquote style='margin-left: 0em;'> <p>The body is quite ok for a comic character.<br />But the head don&#39;t work. Try to understand how other succeful comic artist draw their head. Draw bigger eyes&#44; give more expression and expressivity to your character&#44; turn the direction were she is pointing the nose.</p> </blockquote> </td> </tr></tbody></table>